Monday, April 6, 2015

Omniscience & Joss

So after foisting countless novels and comic books on my friend Brian Solloway​, he responded by recommending something a little outside my comfort zone: Tai Pan. I'm a sci-fi and fantasy guy to a fault, so I have almost no experience with modern historical fiction (as opposed to stuff written in-period, and all of that was mostly via curriculum rather than pleasure.) That's really my only excuse for having missed James Clavell up until now. I tried to keep this review focused on style and free of spoilers, so you should be good to go even if you have yet to read the book.

In brief, the book is about Dirk Straun, an opium trader who becomes Tai-Pan, the supreme ruler of Hong Kong and head of the 'Nobel House,' which is essentially the middle-ground between a shipping empire and a Chinese dynasty. Dirk is a larger than life figure, a peerless sailor with all the ruthless cunning and fighting skills of a pirate king. He has a stronger sense of honor than his rivals, and everybody from the British Navy, but what really sets him apart is the fact that he has gone native. He has made a tremendous effort to learn Chinese culture, and picked up some invaluable tips about hygiene--like, you know wiping your ass--and concepts such as Face and Joss which were hugely important factors of Chinese culture.

The beginning of the book struck me as a bit of a whirlwind. You meet what feels like twenty characters in the first forty pages, and Clavell jumps from perspective to perspective quickly. True third-person omniscient is extremely difficult to write, and somewhat challenging to read as well, which probably explains why it's been recently replaced by rotating POV chapters. Even rarer is for third omniscient to play with true antagonists as well as the good guys. The only other book that I can think of which pulled it off was Dune, and those transitions were much more distinct in Herbert's writing. Here, in the course of a single conversation, we'll hear how three men are planning on shanking each other in the back, while the fourth is worried about parliament and a fifth is hung up on lady problems.

Acclimating took me some time, and doubling back to keep things straight; the exact mechanics of the British politics never became clear to me; Clavell doesn't do exposition. It's a great counterpoint for me, because all of my stuff still has the shine of YA exposition; here's how magic works, here's how the world works, etc. I think there is a happy medium to be had somewhere, and I'd do well to re-read Clavell when I'm trying to pare down the info dumps in my own work.

What won me over and made me love the book by the end was that it surprised me. Every time I had a prediction, the characters would subvert my expectations (and occasionally themselves), or Clavell would use some momentous event from History to ruin everybody's day (Malaria says "'Sup"). There were characters I initially dismissed as minor or supporting who ended up being fulcrums for the plot. There were a few times when this led to disappointment; as some eagerly anticipated scenes never came to pass, but on the whole, being surprised was far better.

This inherently unpredictable plot does a fantastic job of illustrating the concept of Joss, which Clavell introduces in the first couple pages as luck, God, and the Devil all mixed together. Fate is probably our closest cognate, though it is much more mercurial than that. Joss is not written ahead of time. It the force that plays dice with the universe, regardless of what gods or devils have in mind.

It's the perfect rebuttal to the most common complaint about historical fiction: history is boring because we know how it plays out. To that point, I plan on reading Clavell's Shogun on short order.

Saturday, April 4, 2015

Trespassers, Part 1

This morning I finished the first third of my new book, Trespassers. It's already longer than The Harrowing, and I think it's better by a damn sight. It's 260-something pages of contemporary fantasy set in Los Angeles. Here's a proto-jacket blurb:
"For the last three years, Holden Lockheed has lived a life of utter seclusion. Working from home, eating delivery, and living on the internet. That abruptly ends when he receives a visit from The Pinstriped Man. The strange intruder gives him a stranger gift: each night, Holden must relive the day from the perspective of anybody he has seen that day. After seeing the world through the eyes of Lark Wallace, a fearless delivery girl, and Reza Khan, a brilliant fraud, the three of them are drawn into Los Angeles' supernatural underworld."
I'd say more, but seeing how it isn't even a completed story yet, I don't want to give away much. 
Even though I just finished writing it, some lines in chapter 1 are making me wince, and I know it will need some more revisions based on parts 2 and 3. It's also bloated with grammatical errors, (I'm really selling this! Can you tell I write marketing copy?). The take away being: you will have plenty of opportunities to read it later, when it is more complete. Do not feel like this is a one time offer; when I'm done, I will be asking/imploring/conscripting many of you to do your worst.
But if you're curious about what I've been working on for the last fifteen months, let me know and I will shoot you a copy.